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Some drawing i did in 15/20 minuts...so..fast..but ink time was a little more...
It´s not perfect...and almost all was done in my classes...(like always =P )
I have a lot of fun with the little circuls =P
Well..maybe a will work a little more on this one in some boring classes U_U
=P

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This being my first critique using the new system, please bear with me as I try to write a helpful blurb. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

I have been watching your work for some time now. This one features a lovely dress, which works wonders as a fashion design: the circles add both dynamism and movement, elegance and joy, so much joy. The ink is decently applied and so we are presented with this magnificent black and white contrast that works particularly well on the circles, although it could be explored as well in the upper part of the model (a few strings of black hair, perhaps?)

Overall, the anatomy is pleasant to the eye. I also have to highlight the hair as it looks so free and flowy; wonderfully done.

My main suggestion is for you to try different face forms, since the attire and the hair are already mastered by you. The eyes and the nose in particular could be improved, giving space to different expressions and allowing different personalities to emerge... instead of us feeling we are looking at a model, you could give that model a background and a deeper, richer personality by enhancing her facial expressions, so you could enjoy the drawing even more!


Vision: 4 stars - for its freshness and for conveying a realistic fashion design.

Originality: 3.5 stars - I like the idea of the circles abandoning the dress and being in the entire drawing.

Technique: 4 stars - the ink and the use of shadows in the bracelets is very good and solid.

Impact: 2 stars - it makes me awe at the sight of the wonderful dress <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" /> but it does not evoke much more emotions.



Best of luck with your art and may you keep having boring classes... <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" />